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Oh, I laid my head on my pillow,
I gazed up at the stars up above
I tell you it's a miserable feeling,
Oh, when you lose the one you love
That beginning walk sequence is really slow. And your use of sound effects seemed sporadic. Sometimes there was sound for movement. Sometimes there wasn't. Could do with some background music as well. That all said this was a good piece. Well done.
The start was a lil iffy, like jerky, but boy oh boy you redeemed it well!
Keep it up, but the authors comments you put dont really suit the anim, but its probably something much deeper than that, but make this guy in a series, if he isnt already...
Wasn't too bad at all...
Very fluid motions and well timed sounds. Next time though, some background music and a little more storyline will help you too.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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