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Nov 3, 2008 | 9:47 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place November 5, 2008

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Author Comments

This is my first flash submission... and animation. I love Phoenix Wright and saw fit Beelzeboss is a great song to start a music video. I may be a beginner, but I tried my hardest. Hope you like it! :D

EDIT-
Wow! You all rock! Thanks for all the support and getting me my first award!
Don't worry I'll think of some new stuff to put up. :D
Thank you very much and don't be afraid to tell me what you think and what i can improve on!
ROCK ON NEWGROUNDS!

Reviews


CaveiraCaveira

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Excellent choice of audio...

Hey... Tenacious D won my vote on this one! Hehe The synch was ok but you could've varied on the movements of the characters even more... I don't know what anime this is, but surely you could've put some more stuff... Hehe I love these guys... hehe



ShamiltonShamilton

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty good!

I liked this song, i like this flash, all-in-all a good job there, bud. :P
Keep up the good work, you deserve the rating.



CaptainColossusCaptainColossus

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good Stuff

That was a pretty rockin' first submission, nice work.



The-Laugher-Of-LorThe-Laugher-Of-Lor

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good

The sprites were good, but next time, do a little more work on the sprites syncing with the audio. Considering this is your first submission, it is a very decent attempt.



SunrieSunrie

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad...but needs some work on the synching

Well...I hate to say it, but I really believe that people are voting higher on this than they normally would simply because of the song used.

The characters were really out of synch in a lot of places and the overall animation was very slow. In addition, the sprites jumped around a bit, as the author didn't really find their "anchor point" at all.

Considering this is your first submission, it is decent, but on the next submission people won't be as forgiving. Increase the frame rate, make sure your sprites don't move around, and really make sure that your synch is spot on.

All those things make a sub-par Phoenix Wrong submission into a good one, and a good one into a great one. The rest has to do with audio selection. Keep up the work and keep learning.


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moviemaker1127 responds:

you are right. I did use frame rate 12, a mistake I made halfway through the video. I tried to fix it but it screwed over the rest of the beginning and I tried to make due. Im guessing that synchronization would be 10x easier with a larger frame rate. also, if you could, along the lines of anchor points, how do I create efficent ones? It was hard enough trying to onion skin and border my way to synch them up. Also, some of these jumps and movements were created on their own, somehow, toward the end of this animation, things started moving. I don't know why maybe it was something I pressed. If you could provide with some tutorial, that would be awesomely helpful. ^-^ thanks!