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This is my first flash, and I tried to incorporate buttons, but it kinda failed...
seems...ok. it could be better. after all it is your first. i at least sorta get the plot. a little advice, add some sort of caption or dialougue bar to explain things.
Gotta start somewhere.
Well it is a start, next time try to incorporate a more solid plot that we can understand. Also, try to draw everything, including the background. Even if you aren't the best artist, Newgrounders will respect your effort and you will become a better artist.
I'll definitely put my new skill to the test for the next installment. Stay tuned
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