Looks like it's going ot have a promising sequel. My only problem is the dialog. When in doubt "fuck" seems to be your adjective of choice. I think if you took it out in a few lines it would keep the dialog fresh. Just my opinion.
Bill Dunlop
November 3, 2008 –January 6, 2009
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
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Tom and his buddy Bill are local bar stars. Tom happens to be at a tough time period in his life. He'll get through it. I know it.
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a lot of effort must have went into this. this looks like the start of a great series. nice job
I loved the art style, and I loved the storyline, I am hoping to see the next one as soon as it comes out, great work.
The only problem I had with the flash was the sound quality, when they are talking it is sometimes crackly in the background of the sounds, nothing too serious though, just minor stuff, but why bother?
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- 3.67 / 5.00