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This was a project for one of my classes in my graphic design course. I had to make a creative resume, and I chose to do a Flash cartoon.
Here comes the tickle monster!
Underrated, underrated, underrated, three words I can describe you with!
Great jokes in this one!
Much effort was put into this one, that's for sure!
I got a good grade on it too.
How have you not won more awards??
Your cartoons are great!
By the way I like how you animated the mouths, how exactly did you do them smooth like that?
Just basic frame by frame syncing. It's time consuming, but worth it. Although I think I've done better. I looped too much in this one. Thanks for he review.
The animation was flawless
What an unexpected delight!
Well, first off, I'm only here 'cause you scored daily tenth, so congrats to you. But the only reason I found your movie is 'cause I was interested to see what score ws required for a daily tenth nowadays, so my view was more luck than anything else.
Well done on the description, because really, otherwise I'd just left the page. I really liked the creativity you put into it, and was held throughout the entire movie. Your humour is certainly in the right place at the right time. I like the monochromic style you chose for this Flash as well. One noticable weakness is your microphone. I could hear it crackling from time to time, which means you were probably too close. Use a program like Audacity to record, preview and edit your voice clips. The absense of the mug-hitting-character sound effect was missed, 'cause we all love a bit of slapstick comedy.
All in all, a solid showing. Might I suggest next time you add in some background music. Don't worry, Flash will be able to compress it so that it doesn't hurt your small and appreciated file size.
Thanks for the great review. Also, I actually use Audacity.
you should add some more sound fx..
exp studio works well, just the trial is what i use.. record sound fx though the mic via voice and then add effects to tweak it to sound like whatever..
with some more sound fx maybe some tunes it would be polished
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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