Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Xarnor

date: March 22, 2009

That was pretty good. The drawing was nice, although the animation was a bit meh. The music was great ;) I didn't really find it terribly funny, although I did smile at the end. Anyways, this is a decent flash. Good work :)

Score: 10

"Nice"

by: Kyaztro

date: November 15, 2008

It's a shame it didn't make the collab, there were a couple a saw that did get in where I was thinking, damn, I could have made something better in 15 minutes

Score: 8

"Nicely made"

by: Earfetish

date: November 2, 2008

First piece of advice - don't spend the author's comments telling us how bad the movie is. And get rid of the frame saying the exact same thing, too. We'll make our own minds up and it comes across like a blammable flash with all those disclaimers about quality.

Also, make it longer, or make the intro shorter - for a 'short' like this I shouldn't be expected to sit through any pointlessness.

Also, voice-act rather than using speech bubbles.

The animation is very nice and the graphics are lovely too. The blood effects are beyond reproach. A very fluid and pleasing-to-view cartoonish style.

Score: 5

"Better luck next time."

by: omegared

date: November 2, 2008

It's always hard for me as a reviewing NG person to review these types of submissions because I know you probably put a lot of work into this and wanted it to be in the collaboration really bad.

It wasn't that funny it needs to be funnier or more action packed. You'll get funnier the more you practice. Trust me; everyone that cares to get better does get better!

The art and animation are good. I think if you would have had a better joke than just the kid killing Snake then you would have made it in.

I saw this coming a mile away. Right when the screen blacked out I knew solid snake was gonna be shot.
Maybe if you would have had the gun shot and then just shown him butt humping the teacher of the school instead it would have been funny.
(I'm just saying. It makes me laugh.)
Take it with a grain of salt!

Also why is solid snake in the school? What does he want from the kid? Is he trying to cheat on a test or something? No, because this kid is just drawing; and why does this kid draw tank man stuff? Is solid snake trying to stop him from drawing a new design of Metal gear? Metal Gear Tank?

These questions aren't clearly answered in the flash which is a part of your story telling skills.

Don't worry you will get better!

You have skill in art and animation now just work on your comedy and synopsis.

2/5
RB

PS I didn't think all the entries in the MGSC disc 1 or 2 were funny either. So, please don't get discouraged.

Score: 7

"S'okay"

by: Fion

date: November 2, 2008

Your art was alright, the plot was quite uninteresting. It was short. I supposed the theme of it didn't appeal to me and hence that is why I don't feel it was good. So I will credit you for your reasonable quality artwork. Well done in that department.