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this took about 2 days to make
and this is my first real flash
i woulda give u a 10 but it was short but i do give u 5/5 =D but still make another one but more epicer and longer =D pm me if u will make 1 o-o
For a first flash...
I can't give you a break because it's your first flash, so I rated it poorly. However, we all have to have our first flash creations. Mine sucked, and I still haven't submitted anything (i have some stuff done though, just waiting to send it out).
Draw your own stuff, don't use sprites
Make it longer
Have a background
Don't use random shapes, that's overdone, draw nice art
Anyways, good luck next time
an okay movie.
the music made it SOOOOOOOO much better,
but the music didn't stop when the movie ended.
oh, and good job making your first flash! ^_^
i think you just need practice!
great vid! :)
Well the animation was so so but I liked where it was going!
Btw, thanks for the help in the forum :3
The return of Dr. Bees!
Goling about and preventing things.
He was working in a whip shop in Flushing, Queens...
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