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It was a nice short story, and was a lot different than what is usually seen here on Newgrounds. So you get unique points for that :D. My only beef with it was that you really didn't have "interactive" choices...you were forced to make choices so the story could continue on a set path. But the concept you have going is good. Perhaps next time you could include the alternate paths as well. Keep up the good work!
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Rated 3 / 5 stars October 31, 2008
That was rather cute!
It was a nice short story, and was a lot different than what is usually seen here on Newgrounds. So you get unique points for that :D. My only beef with it was that you really didn't have "interactive" choices...you were forced to make choices so the story could continue on a set path. But the concept you have going is good. Perhaps next time you could include the alternate paths as well. Keep up the good work!
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 31, 2008
Awesome!!!
That is really good!
I would prefer a coloured Flash, but ur style r good enuff in BnW.
Hope to see ur project in the future,
THIS WILL GO IN MY FAVORITE LIST.... :)
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 31, 2008
Good
Coiuld have made it more interactive.