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This is based on the first short story I ever wrote.
The soundtrack is composed of all original sound made and recorded by collaborator Matt Greenwood and myself. It's most effective if set at an adequate volume.
I'm interested in any thoughts you have, please post them.
Thanks for watching.
Sorry didnt do it for me. I see ur going down the creepy salad fingers limited animation, slow action style, but just didnt seem very good. i mean the animation, or the sound design, or plot. It seemed more like you were aiming for the gore and shock value without a basic grasp of animation, or flash.
It worked for me..
The thing you've got to understand (as I'm sure you do) is that shorts like these appeal to only a certain branch of audience. Therefore, when you get someone slating the choppy animation or the fact that "it made little sense to me" you know they aren't your audience.
This is a very experimental, dark piece of art. The music (if it could be called that) really sets the atmosphere here, and almost serves as the adhesive in terms of this piece's structure.
I was disturbed, yet very entertained. Good job!
What... The... Hell...
It's ok... I wasn't planning on sleeping tonight anyways...
All I have to say is that I couldn't even finish it. I didn't care much for the animation, and yes I read the update, I just think you could have done something different to make it better. It didn't really catch my attention either. I couldn't quite follow along to what the hell was going on, and like I said I just could not finish it. Nice try though. Hope you do better in the future.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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