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it is my Newgrounds submission for 2008 Halloween event.
Massito Banditos: Masks
That was pretty good!
I liked the chara syle a lot, they were drawn really creatively, some of the backgrounds were awesome, for example the one in the scene where they walk outside in the rain. Another thing that i liked was how the car rode into the building, was done very nicely too. Voices were over avarage, but, in my opion you should try to make your scenes a little shorter and show different angles. That's something you have to practice, it's my biggest mistake, as well! so keep it up! Peace!
Promising style, still needs work
I saw promising style in the way you draw you characters. If you put more attention into your backgrounds, and scenery, I'd put at least 3 more stars up. Also had trouble reading the speech text. Consider using speech bubbles, or an alternative? Animation techniqe needs some refinement as well.
Please keep working at it.
Thanks for advice!
That was pretty nice. I liked it a little. Nothing special though.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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