Minecraft: TNA Part 15
N00bly and Snake encounter the Witch while Milky Dad schemes against them!
4.38 / 5.00 44,945 ViewsI'm aware that its not a very long animation but i started a bit late to have it ready for halloween. I hope you enjoy it and any feedback is very welcome.
Micsa
Speacial Thanks to fidioproductions for all your help
Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 31, 2008
Rushed Near End!
I saw the progress of this flash and it was going great! Then you rushed the ending! Typical Micsa!
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2008
Could be better
The guy walked funny and the drawings/animations could have been a lot better. Just my 2 cents
Rated 1 / 5 stars October 30, 2008
Doesn't cut it.
This screams 2nd grader halloween theme essay...
The creepy old house!
Marc was out on Halloween trick or treating. He was walking alone and it was dark. He walked around a corner and saw hundreds of zombies and ghosts and monsters. He didn't like it so he ran into the closest house. Evil eyes looked at him. The house was very dark and he got attacked by ghost.
The end
Written by little Timmy.
Get my point? You're not particular good at drawing nor animating in flash, but you know the basics of both. Therefore you should really focus on training your script writing. Analyse movies you like and note how a story is told. Search the internet for information of story writing and making storyboards and such. Could prove helpful :)
I gave it a zero. I'm sorry but it's just not good in any aspects. I foresee a blam.