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Oct 30, 2008 | 8:11 AM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my official entry for the 2008 Newgrounds Halloween Flash-Off. Its also my first submission to newgrounds. So break it to me gently guys. There was a lot more I would have liked to have done with this, but I found out about the Halloween Flash-Off a week ago. Enjoy, all criticism is welcome.

The music used is Premonition by Phil Kline.

Reviews


eric-swansoneric-swanson

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2008

Loved It

That was creepy and well drawn. Very nice FBF. I also loved the 3D perspectives. Most FBF that I see is just randomness, but this had some great suspense and creepy settings. I hope to see more from you.


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s-o-cs-o-c

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 30, 2008

Could've been more...

So you did that whole filming with videocam and sketch it up-thingy? Actually it adds a decent effect to the "scary factor", however it was a bit too white and empty.
A lot is missing "story" wise. There is no real story and we are completely aware of what's going on. Guy does something to a book, eecky thing comes out of the book, guy runs, eecky thing catches guy and posses him (Makes him supa eveeil?)? Help us out a bit... Give us a book title perhaps to let us know that "wooh this is one evil ass book".
Also slow the tempo down... Create a mood. You just jump right into it as if where introduces to a story right in the middle of it. My suggestion is that you use some better ambience music to enhance eecky-nizz, introduce us to the book with a title so we know what the frick is going down here, and give us a bit of an introduction. Watch the guy read the book while the ambience increases. Watch him hesitate to do whatever he did with the book (What does he do?). Stuff like that. The chase was pretty good. The panic was enhanced with the handheld recordings you did.

The "creepy" sound made me think of furios chihuahuas.

I gave it a 3/10 to help it pass judgement. While it's not spectacular it at least deserves to get by.



SteffSteff

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 30, 2008

wow

Scary a bit, but it was awesome!
Good job!



lolzvillelolzville

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2008

GREAT FBF

i liked it and the sudden blackout and noises starteld me