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Aright, this is my very first flash animation, and I know I'm going to get bad ratings, but at least tell me why. Constructive ratings will make me create funnier flash animations, so why not?
I'll add sound, music, and a preloader after I get some sleep.
Thanks to Ian for inspiring me to make a flash out of a stupid inside joke.
Sound, and lots of it... Sound is good... If you are going to use text, give a couple more seconds for people to read what it says, not everyone is a speed reader... Backgrounds.... More color... and NO stick people... when flash was first starting to get popular stick was awesome... now.... not so much.... Oh, preloaders and replays that look super :)
Always make a full effort
Never use stick people, usually frowned upon, you need sound, needs to be longer, use a background, and yeah that's about it. I could say: "Get amazing animating skills out of nowhere!" But that's a stupid thing to ask someone to do.
I didn't mind it to be honest. But you asked for constructive criticism...
Animation was fine... basic but fine :D but I will say that for future sequels it would be great to see some sound put in.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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