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The fight till the end saga as come to an end! It was hard work, but im proud of it. i was more careful with the speech in this one, and with sound also.
The speechs are in internet language sometimes cause it uses less space that way.
I really hope u dont give me a bad score cause of the ending:P
Hope u like it!!
Oh.....srry about the preloader, i forgot to put it!
Hey, this was pretty good. I would REALLY try to drop the chatspeak and speak proper english. Things like "ur" and "u" can really throw off dialogue. Also, and this is more of a suggestion than anything, try using text bubbles instead of matching the letters with the color of the figure. Otherwise, the choreography (if you can call it that) was well done, and it was an overall good flash.
thz for the advice ill test the effect of the chatbubbles someday:P
But the chatspeak will continue probably, cause i just use it to save space, ill use proper english everytime i can, but i cant promise it. im still improving tough and i might change in the future.......
but again thz for the review, its usefull
It was a little hard to follow at times, and the chatspeak threw it a little off, but nice choice of music and over all it was a good piece.
That was one of the problems i came up with, but the solution was seing it more than one time:P to completely see everithing that happens.
The chatspeak... has i said before it was to use less space, thats i i used it, and ill keep using it, on the stickmans.
thz for the tips
the fighting was a little lame in the beginning tho
Its just different...its only my third animation and the more i do it the more it improves, thats why the movements during the animation change a bit.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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