REALLY NEEDED SOUND.
Now that that's out of the way, this deifitely ha spotential. The facial expressions were very well done (for this level of animation skill), and while that actual movement of the people could have been better, what they were doing was... noticeable. I wasn't left asking myself what exactly he just did because the actual movement was so broken. That didn't happen here.
Another thing: the ending was just it cut off. is there to be another episode?