Flight WIP by Hitokiri-Dono



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Submitted: 10/28/2008 | 01:51PM EST

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Genre: Action

Current Score: 3.05 / 5.00

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Author Comments

This is a WIP that I didn't finish. In the middle of working on it, I decided to post what I had so far here on Newgrounds. This Flash is open to contructive criticism and new ideas. :) (I wanna know what your ideas are, too, ya know.)

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Original Idea was that he was going to weave through the city, and the missiles that were following him would hit stray objects. He emerges safely. :)
Alright, off to spar more with Flash.

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Average Score: 6.7 / 10

Score: 6
Aci6

"{{Interesting}}"

by: Aci6
date: October 28, 2008

while an interesting movie- and flash concept at that, it didn't feel it reached its full potential.
The lack of sound is an obvious one but it feels as if it could have benefited if it had some.
Overall its not too, the artwork is decent enough its just the lack of any sound which ruins the full potential it could achieve.

~A~

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Score: 7
tictackmanicac

"it was good"

date: October 28, 2008

it was ok but the graphic were bad

October 28, 2008

Author's Response:

If you explained more, I could improve it :(

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Score: 7
Matthawks

"Didn't Like It"

date: October 28, 2008

I didn't like it on the basis that i hate silent movies,but i love it somehow...
so ill give it a...

Rating:7
Score:3

October 28, 2008

Author's Response:

Alright, lot's of people dislike the "no sound" part, so I'll try to look for stuff.

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Score: 7
RedDragon000

"Looks great"

date: October 28, 2008

Looks good so far. Having them weave through the city sounds cool.

It needs some music though. I'm sure you can find something appropriate in the Audio Portal.

Keep up the good work!

October 30, 2008

Author's Response:

Only if you drop by and check it out.

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Score: 6
Esho

"Storyless"

by: Esho
date: October 28, 2008

It's weird that this starts right at the action with no story or reason whatsoever.
The drawings and animation are good, though the "Mach 5" animation needs to be different, because the way it is now feels sluggish and not speedy.

October 28, 2008

Author's Response:

As far as the Mach 5 animation, I feel the same way. Must change O.o
I'll come up with some sort of story for a later animation.

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