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Oct 28, 2008 | 1:51 PM EDT

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This is a WIP that I didn't finish. In the middle of working on it, I decided to post what I had so far here on Newgrounds. This Flash is open to contructive criticism and new ideas. :) (I wanna know what your ideas are, too, ya know.)

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Original Idea was that he was going to weave through the city, and the missiles that were following him would hit stray objects. He emerges safely. :)
Alright, off to spar more with Flash.

Reviews


Aci6Aci6

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 28, 2008

{{Interesting}}

while an interesting movie- and flash concept at that, it didn't feel it reached its full potential.
The lack of sound is an obvious one but it feels as if it could have benefited if it had some.
Overall its not too, the artwork is decent enough its just the lack of any sound which ruins the full potential it could achieve.

~A~



tictackmanicactictackmanicac

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 28, 2008

it was good

it was ok but the graphic were bad


Hitokiri-Dono responds:

If you explained more, I could improve it :(


MatthawksMatthawks

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 28, 2008

Didn't Like It

I didn't like it on the basis that i hate silent movies,but i love it somehow...
so ill give it a...

Rating:7
Score:3


People find this review helpful!
Hitokiri-Dono responds:

Alright, lot's of people dislike the "no sound" part, so I'll try to look for stuff.


RedDragon000RedDragon000

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 28, 2008

Looks great

Looks good so far. Having them weave through the city sounds cool.

It needs some music though. I'm sure you can find something appropriate in the Audio Portal.

Keep up the good work!


Hitokiri-Dono responds:

Only if you drop by and check it out.


EshoEsho

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 28, 2008

Storyless

It's weird that this starts right at the action with no story or reason whatsoever.
The drawings and animation are good, though the "Mach 5" animation needs to be different, because the way it is now feels sluggish and not speedy.


Hitokiri-Dono responds:

As far as the Mach 5 animation, I feel the same way. Must change O.o
I'll come up with some sort of story for a later animation.