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Oct 28, 2008 | 11:19 AM EDT

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This is strictly speaking only my 3rd flash submitted to NG. I started it as a practice flash but I was only half way through it when i got bored and annoyed at it (any flash artist will know the feeling) and stopped making it.
So a couple of nights ago I decided to start on it again! and i didnt finish it to how i first planned but i touched it up making it better than it was (new colour, improved sound etc.) and now i think its good enough to show to all you people out there!

This is a short and sweet (pun not intended) animation which will give you a laugh with no loading time!

And just remember that this is a very important lesson to all you cake lovers and rule breakers out there...



Rated 3 / 5 stars


but a little too quick
make a cake series
the audio combined with the movie and that's a good point
it needs more animation of the characters, not just puhs and pull them at the ways
make a leg movement and show it a lot
overall was not so bad...

thejdcole responds:

haha, yeah that sounds like a nice idea.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Good attempt

First of all the sound loop is very bad , it gets annoying , also you can tell what graphic you put effort in other you did quickly.

so improve your graphic , check your sound so it doesn't cut in the middle of the loop and in my opinion im way bored out of stick animation , either animate them well or put some detail in the stick so it doesn't look like you draw them in 4 sec.

its constructive criticism not flaming don't take it as a personal assault :P you got to start somewhere !

thejdcole responds:

Yeah i know what you mean, but sticks are easy to use to improve your animation skills (i.e. not drawing skills).

The sound loop was meant to cut when the guy got shot btw.


Rated 4 / 5 stars



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