Score: 9

"The ending was messed up abit."

by: Little-Red-Bear

date: November 3, 2008

The ending was messed up abit. But it was funny. The start was great drawings, make a sequal, next time keep it to the real stuff.

Score: 9

"...eh"

by: Ollopa

date: October 28, 2008

I gave you a 5 cuz I thought the end bit was funny. Every one is lazy at some point but hey it didn't suck. Had I seen the dance you talked about I doint think you would get a 5.

Score: 5

"I won't down vote because of your opignon."

by: Skampie

date: October 28, 2008

I'm going to juge the flash itself ; The graphic were 6/10 because there were color in it and this was an skecht-book style ( maybe it is your still ) , this type of style can be used in shorts jokes flashs ( Ex: S²²t joke or Fat joke ) or flashs with exegerations ( perfect ex : Egoraptor flash ) or simply explaining an opignon. You make a satire wich can make some laugh, it is usually for spam person that satire type joke satisfy due to the reaction comments of pissed-off people. About the motivation you had , well maybe serious content isn't your type , so try to focus on satire or quick due to your skecht-book art style. The story of it isn't completed , no one can argue with that. The lumisnosity of the heat google vision were unmatched , but it was good btw. The voice acting ( even short ) was really good due to the fact that is a normal human being reaction when there is hidden strangers in shadows. There were shadow effects , i liked it. If you want to be lazy and have ( well , maybe ) awards then do quick short jokes.

Well , I hope I might helped you in your ( maybe ) next flashs. Peace.

Score: 9

"Well I can sympathize with you here..."

by: TailsPrower

date: October 28, 2008

I'm not a person of much motivation either so I understand how an undertaking such as this became too tall an order. However, during the genuine run of the animation, I was quite impressed with the visuals! Also Jin-Roh glowy eyed soldiers FTW!

By the way, I was only slightly startled... nothing more. Just startled. I hope you'll someday overcome this curse and succeed!

Score: 7

"WHAT THE FUCK!?"

by: Phobotech

date: October 28, 2008

WHY!? It started off fucking AWESOME!!!

Shit, look at my first flash...now look at how your flash begun. This could've been GOLD dude! Stop procrastinating and get to work; you have an incredible talent just waiting to be unleashed!

You're microphone is clear
The sound effects were crisp.
The grit-the detail in the backgrounds and everything were superb...and then you pull an Egoraptor Easter Egg before the middle of it all!?

For shame, sir....for shame...

I want to see something you didn't copp-out on! Voting accordingly.