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Submitted: 10/26/2008 | 03:04AM EST

File Info: Movie | 166.9 KB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Other

Current Score: 2.49 / 5.00

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I never thought I would do it, but here is my first flash creation and first submission to Newgrounds!
I tried not to let it suck too much.

Vote what you think is fair, and please feel free to give suggestions. Keep in mind that I have almost no artistic talent and my willingness to devote large amounts of time to a flash movie is minimal. Other than that, anything that can help I'll be happy to hear.

Who knows, inspiration may strike again someday (although by then the free trial for CS3 will have ended).
Thanks for watching.

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Average Score: 7.2 / 10

Score: 7
Krnakzin

"cute"

date: November 2, 2008

its was kinda cute n funny...

make it a loop dude, that would make it better

also speed it up n add more movement...

November 3, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah, if I did this again (which I probably won't) I'd definitely speed it up. As for the loop, I'm not sure I could manage and keep it vaguely in time with the music.

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Score: 10
Psycedelic

"LOL!"

date: October 26, 2008

The kids made me lol.

October 26, 2008

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Score: 6
frogsicle

"ha ha, nice"

date: October 26, 2008

that's one of the few "first movies" I've actually protected. It was really short, and their movements seemed pretty slow, and there wasn't exactly a story... but you know all that, and it was cute. Nice start.

October 26, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the protect. I was really not trying to be too ambitious with my first.
Thanks for the comment about movement, I think I should have probably bumped up the frame rate a bit. I'll keep that in mind.

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Score: 10
lshida

"HAHA!"

by: lshida
date: October 26, 2008

Good job! Wow, that was funny as hell.
/StoneLock

October 26, 2008

Author's Response:

I'm glad you got a laugh out of it.

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Score: 3
SamWayne

"Ehh."

date: October 26, 2008

I understand that u hav no talent (as specified above, I'm not THAT big of an @$$) and i definatly understand that you don't have time. maybe flash submissions aren't your deal. Everyone has some reason for not posting flash (for me it's lack of software)

October 26, 2008

Author's Response:

You're probably right about flash submissions not being my thing. This one was really only submitted because I was making it anyway. The picture is a bit of an inside joke in my family, but I hoped others might enjoy it as well.

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