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This is the second movie I've ever finished! This series is the whole reason I joined Newgrounds.
I hope you enjoy the trailer and have a happy Halloween!
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Entry for 2008 Halloween contest
This looks interesting I look foreard to the series.
i dont know
Its kinda cheezy :/ the animation style was aweful but i guess if you worked on it a bit it could be good :/
:3 YAY and stuff
:3 YAY looks rather marvellous since the beginning of it, good stuffs. I don't know what you're complaining about when it comes to your voice acting. You should do more! I like the art work a lot, excepting what I already commented to you about but I can totally understand why its like that, I don't blame you at all :3. The only things I could shake a stick at was the people when they moved off... it isn't quite quick enough to not notice them uh... not moving their legs? AND, as a tip MORE BLOOOOD :3:3 next time, but that could be just because blood is amusing to me. Ultimately I think it's a great bit of work and a tasty trailer... now go make the rest and be nice to fruit and vegetables this time!!
Good For a Trailer, but...
"I am having your power?" Huh? That line just seemed... awkward. The animation was better than average although fairly short (6/10). The story, well... crap, but showed a lot of promise. I guess that is what a trailer should be (5.5/10). Audio was okay. I did enjoy "Amazing Grace' (6.5/10). Overall, I would say it could be an AMAZING series. It shows promise, but you either need...
1. A much longer animation next time around
2. Some quality story telling. You said "this is the whole reason I joined Newgrounds." If that is true, that means you probably have a whole story lined up. If so, and it is high-quality, I am very much looking forward to the future of the series. I could see this as being the start of some amazing, dark horror series.
Overall... it has great promise, but at this point, it is only fairly good. 6/10. Just like this series, you have potential. A lot of it. Keep it up.
the idea's neat but definitely going to need some work. you really do need to work on your animation, the whole gliding away deal really bothered me. You really do need to do some frame by frame animation it would really help a lot. Really all in all you just need to take some time. But overall I thought it was okay and I'm looking forward to see what's next. good luck!
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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