Score: 9
"Alright."
date: October 22, 2008
I guess that was a way to end it. Lol.
Good job trying to include the BG music in at first, but when you did, it seemed that the sounds clashed and it was hard to hear voices at first. But good try at it.
It didn't end on a cliffhanger like 1 and 2, so kudos for that.
Not bad though overall for your first series.
I look forward to seeing more good work from you.
Maybe you could try flash animating next? You may be quite good at it and not even know. Sprites are a place to start, but I could easily see much better from you.
You have a good storyline although it was short, you just have a little audio difficulty, which is something that you will improve on over time.
9/10 and 5/5 here.
It's all a step in the right direction for you, and all of the really great flash animators have to start somewhere.
You're on your way. That's for sure.
Just remember. Don't rush. Take your time, and it will really pay off in the end.
October 22, 2008
Author's Response:
I have animated before but I sucked at it so I then went to sprite movies.
