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The movie was good, the animation was good, and the storyline has potential, but the voice acting was bad and proper english was neglected it's not, "hi! i can use telephone?" its "can i use your telephone" or "may i use your telephone" until you can get the hang of it or get someone who can speak english properly to voice act, i wouldnt make things talk in your flashes. But qudos for effort keep trying.
I'm not really all that sure what to make of this. Is it a reference to a movie or just a generic standalone? Either way, the man's voice acting was very loud and muffled, but okay, could have sucked it up had there been a bit more of a story to tell. Alas, it fell short of what I was expecting.
I would recommend you expand on this for a more rounded-out project. Who knows? Maybe it'll be far greater than one would think for it.
It could have been...
It could have been better if you worked on th dialogue and animation.
The setting was a bit depressing.
Weird, funny and it had sound this time! W00T! lol just to let you know, in English, when using a active verb, you almost always use a pronoun. So, instead of, "maybe can use the phone," would be, "maybe I can use the phone." English is confusing man.
okay i have seen worse things in my life
but this is just...BAD
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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