Ok...
good for ur first. i would try making the frame speed to bout 20 or 25 frames per second. and a longer battle, he kinda punched him then killed him
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Hello!!! World, it's good to be alive right!!?
anyways......
this is actually my very first flash that I have made ever in my life.
it contains Shadow and Cell Pushing their selves to the limit.
this video is short to let you know but hope you still enjoy it....
it took me about hmmmmm only a week to finish it.
well, Im trying my best to GO PRO! in making my flash videos......meaning to start making animations based with intense knowledge!! YAH!! .........man life can(sigh) why does life have to be so cruel sometimes.....?
sorry there's no replay button......
if this video isn't great im sorry i'll try to do my best next time.....(sigh).....
well, you said it was your first try
overall, it wasnt very good. but if you made something full length, maybe with a stroyline, or a more intense confrontation it could be alot better
it was ok....i guess
i see that u got some skill with this....but if your gonna make a fighting sprite series, i suggest u look at some other ones...
i can only think of alvin earthworms smbz series of the top of my head for a very good example of a sprite fighting movie. this flash lacked plot, graphics were good but i think if you watch alvin's work u can learn a thing or 2...
at least i think so... 5/10. good first effort, plot was lacking though work on that.
kawaiiminda responds:
thanks, ehe you know before i even became a member i watch the super mario bros z series really,really GREAT!
Hmmm...
MrRoshay, CHILL BUDDY, CHILL, we know this didnt meet your standards...but you dont have to use little examples to make this guy feel even worse...i mean, aleast he tried...You gotta admit, this was better than that other crap that somehow got passed the portal.... ._. And besides, this is a flash video, your not gonna DIE from not seeing the whole thing ok...(Unless it was that Awesome). I mean, you dont have to go THAT overboard... xD
ANYWHO, this flash was pretty fluent...certainly as the guy before me said it was a test, its still pretty good. :T besides, you tried hard. But next time, make a bit of a longer fight scene, as well as a more...."action" sort of battle, not just 2 little foos charging for thier life, when one guy dies in 2 seconds after charging for the same amount of time. LOL, that just doesnt make sense. Try to develop the storyline MORE, and try to improve on the little details. Things like the same attacks, THOSE, arent attractive, or eye catching where you can keep your viewers watching, you gotta get like, BIG attacks, that are like over dramatic...(or you can just go for shiny, people like shiny things 8D), Anywho, I believe that you can do WAY better than this...so...TRY and PUSH yourself over the limits.
I Look forward to seeing your next flash, and see if you improved. Good Luck on your next flash. And NEVER give up, no matter how bad or negative the comments are, its just thier opinions, no matter how much crap they can say, it doesnt change WHO you are and change how the Flash turns out. Things like "F*CK You or, stupid things" just ignore them, they cant do much if they just tell you that. Anyways, lol, im not gonna stop here. GL.
6/10 For Trying. + Other things im too lazy to mention.
kawaiiminda responds:
Hey thanks your very nice i try to make my next video better....oh and by any chance....i need help with my sound, when i add it on macromedia pro flash 8
it gets all crummy if you know what i mean.... so i was wondering if you can help me out plz ^__^ thanks for this wonderful comment.
CHEERS! :)
good but..
I agree with MrRoshay... :)
I'm sure you would make great movies if you draw your own characters! :D
I give you a 7 because I believe in you.
take care!
x
kawaiiminda responds:
hey thanks! ^___^