Score: 9

"Looks great"

by: seether160796

date: October 26, 2008

It does look great, there are a few things that was...neeing, slight improvement. The way they walk could have been smoother. Two of the guys looked the same, just change them slightly then it wuld look better. Oh and the weapon were well, the minimees shoudnt be with them all, the minimee should be with the lead man, the the rest should have m4's or m16's and whatnot, but it dosent matter if this is to be a comedy really. which it looks like it will be. looks grear so I won't complain, good luck for it! How far are you for it?

Score: 7

"interesting"

by: ImaginaryLog

date: October 19, 2008

It was short but nice graphics, I'm looking forward to it.

Score: 9

"One issue"

by: Syklar

date: October 19, 2008

The artwork is good now its be about accuracy, i noticed three of the soldiers had light machine guns that where unloaded and the last guy had a shotgun, see if you can come up with an M4 for two of them an id be a lil more accurate with what soldiers carry. Cant complain about anything else.

Score: 9

"nice,"

by: LozzoSAURUS

date: October 19, 2008

im looking forward to it, but have a think about how ppl walk and see if u can make it smoother. alos the first guy you introduced and the third i think its was, looked almost exactly the same....
anyway, i hope it comes out ok :D gud luck

Score: 6

"Not bad"

by: TetsuyaDL

date: October 19, 2008

Not bad, the presentation was smooth. The walking animation was a little jumpy, but still decent.

My main criticism would be that the character designs are too similar; it looks like everything's the same except for hairstyle and hair color, and one of them has glasses. If you gave them slightly different skin tones, a little more variety in their hair, and perhaps different height/build/head shape, that would add a lot.

Also, the guy falling down the sand dune would be more impressive with a sound effect to go with it.