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Oct 18, 2008 | 7:14 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This was called "Deadly Disaster on Dark Street", but I shortened the name. Well, this is my first movie. Enjoy. Sorry for no audio.

Go here to view the story (remove spaces):
ht tp :// asteinborn 78. ej. am/ story_ 1. pdf

UPDATE: The text was unreadable. That is fixed.
UPDATE 2: Added sound, added in fleeing.

Reviews


SabbalonnSabbalonn

Rated 0 / 5 stars February 5, 2011

I looked at it for a cpl of secounds

Its a zoomed out pdf file. Put something in it for me to criticise please. What was that animation ?



JunDooJunDoo

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 18, 2008

i agree with falariem

how the hell DID this pass judgement?

you get 0 for everything just cuz its not readable
humor possible but couldn't read text
plot was possible but couldn't read text
character develp was possible but couln't read text
etc.
also animation was at a level under decency, too fast for the normal newgrounds watcher to catch attention too. larger script, smoother animation and this could be good


iMate900 responds:

will be fixed!


falariemfalariem

Rated 1 / 5 stars October 18, 2008

Whoa!

Way too fast! way too small! way too short!

How the hell did this pass judgement?


iMate900 responds:

Why would you ask?


uytre80uytre80

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 18, 2008

Sucks

This sucked. The words were too small, it went too fast, animation was bad, and it was boring.


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iMate900 responds:

goin' be... longer... with sound.


AfrodaleAfrodale

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars October 18, 2008

ahm

critique= its too fast and short


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iMate900 responds:

it'll be slow and a bit longer.