Score: 7
"A worthy effort after all that time!"
date: October 3, 2009
So I've reached - with a circle - back to the series I first started viewing. Decided to rate and critique the previous one first though.
Now that I see it - you improved VERY greatly when compared to the last series. Really big congrats on you for that.
The same criticisms that were present during the last 6-9, however, are still here.
We STILL don't know nigh anything about Dennis/Woody/Davis. You really have to fix that at some point. It's really not hard inserting a short dialogue somewhere about them discussing why they are doing what they are doing and how they know each other - in passing.
Same goes for Deep. He is a guy who just completed his sword...
So... who is he besides that? Why does he want to fight hunters, when did those hunters start terrorizing the village? Why did our band of heroes come to this village specifically? So many questions! And I believe you have just forgotten to answer them, rather than to savor the reveal.
The voice acting was pretty good actually! The child was a bit awkward though... But he actually had a purpose! Nice touch!
Deep really could have shown more on his motivations of joining some random dudes in a conquest to save the world though. :P The thing that is commendable about him, though, is that you really can show his character through his voice. That is well portrayed.
Voice acting a bit too silent though...
That's all!
Very well done, overall, though! I keep talking about the bad things, but I actually enjoy these, or I wouldn't be spending so much time writing all these reviews.