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This is my first movie with sprites. I worked on this for a while so please don't blam. never mind about the glitch earlier i think i fixed it. also some of the other messups i made are fixed now :P
Nice for first
Now before you start going crazy remember. Every bodys first flash sucks. I remember mine "shudder". You'll get better i swear! So go get yourself a cookie and look towards the future!!! And have fun
thx see everybody, this is what a real review should be like
failed attempt . . .
wow. This has wayy too many flaws. I'll list them.
1. Totally half assed. The way his body moves . . . the choppy-ness of it all.
2. The original song could be heard in the background, through the other song.
3. Quest for shrooms? Totally unoriginal.
4. The blood . . . do I even have to explain that?
5. Again with the way he moves, it's just so stupid, the speed in which he moves constantly changes.
6. The fight scene was cheesey
Please take more time with your flash submissions.
i fixed #2 and about the other "flaws" you talked about jeez did u even read the fucking description? this is my first sprite movie and ur all expecting it to be a 5 star professional looking thing?
funny/weird right there but i can definatly see this on youtube!
....what the hell.......
Look, I hardly beleave you worked on that for very long. The whole thing wasn't funny, and the background inside the castle looked like shit. The animation was very very poor and uninteresting. My guess is that sprites just aren't your thing....
I DONT SEE YOU MAKING AN ATTEMPT TO ACTUALLY TAKE THE TIME TO MAKE A FUCKING FLASH MOVIE BETTER THAN MINE EITHER jeez before u go hating on someone's work, why dont you go work on your own first? you probably dont even know the basics of flash im justa fucking kid for god sakes i would like to see you make a flash movie better than mine but oh, you cant BECAUSE YOU DONT EVEN HAVE A SINGLE FUCKING ONE
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