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This is my first movie with sprites. I worked on this for a while so please don't blam. never mind about the glitch earlier i think i fixed it. also some of the other messups i made are fixed now :P
this is just stupid and unoriginal
rofl jking saw you rmessage earlier...uhm itssss kinda funny sort.....good try for your first sir but the key to sexy flash is taking time on it im pretty sure i could whip your flash up in about 30 minutes to an hour if u spent lets just say a week of good hard work on it it would probably turn out way more kick ass then you'd thought. GJ keep at it im sure you'll eventually put something out worth watching
You'll Get Better For Sure
I can't even make a flash cause mine would suck.I tried and saw how it would look and sadly I gave up on it.So don't worry bout whatever these pricks say,you did good for your first try.
This is great, just the concept deserves 5/5 10/10, and thanks a bunch for using our SMB theme in it! Peace!
That's quite alrite
Yeah I enjoyed that actually. It went on a bit but you had the basic flash building blocks roughly in place. Learn some new flash techniques and spend more time working on style and flair (the best flashs have hours poured into them). Promising for a first entry ;)
HIS WEAK SPOT IS HIS NOSE! I FINALLY KNOW HIS WEAK SPOT YAYAYAY!
Err... Ok seriously,
Nicely done for a first but some of the text near the beginning went really fast and some of his jumps weren't very smooth and had no laws of gravity at all, also the battle could have been longer :)
Otherwise just a few touch ups to how things line up, a bit more smoothness in the motions, and some speed adjustment and you could be making some decent sprite flashes.
In particular, I say I could have done without the coin collecting at all and I would have liked the battling longer.
Thanks for the time!
well i didnt get too good of a score but thx for the criticism i just hate when people criticize by going "oh this looks so stupid and unoriginal make it better"
A short film about a park bench
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