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this is just a short flash that i made with jsut a mouse. please dont vote stupidly. the first one before this is on my name but there is a catch up so its ok.
Neat little animation
The story was quite standard but you narrated it pretty well :).
The graphics may not be so good but they were sufficient to visualize your story.
A bit more action would be good.
And thanks for using my music :D!
what are they supposed to be, pickles!? what was the whole thing about? where is the plotline? and why did it suck soooooooooooooooo BAD!
its not too bad i guess just make it longer and try to take time on it. otherwise its not bad i must admit
Is this your first film if it is it shows but it also shows promise. If not you should take more time in the audio aspects instead of just fushing threw it and throwing out in the portal.
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