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i worked really hard on this. hope you guys like it
Many things to ponder...
I would have been a lot more into the first scene if you would have put in a longer music clip. Just having it repeat with the space at the end got annoying. Also, when they do flipps, you should really have them be two pieces. I understand that is the matrix they can do a flip with their body extended like that, but it just doesn't look right, and a person with a 2 part body shouldn't be hard, since you did the one dude with mutliple body parts as it was. Also, I would have liked to have had sound effects. The movie is inder a MB, so sounds won't be a problem.
Okay, I bagged on your movie enough (actually, not really, but whatever)
Okay graphics, which is actually good, considering the length of the movie. Good job on making the people look like they got their heads shot. Thank you for making that aspect realistic (A persons head would fly off if they got shot in the head)
Umm, I think that's it. Good movie. Oh, put in one screenthat describes his motavation (mainly becuase I want to know what thought went through your head when you decided to make this movie) :) REM 9/11
It was way too long, please try to draw more than just 10 cells next time.
Poor throughout until near the end.
The movie just seemed to be yet another pointless violence movie, it would have been nice if you'd had some story to it, like instead of him just doing random killings there should have been a reason as to why he was doing it as it would have made it more interesting. I did like the part where the guy shot towards the screen and how you made it look like he was going to shoot the viewer but it turned out to be some other guy he was shooting at. When you brought in the old man I guess that part wasn't too bad as there was some sort of story as to why the old man wanted to kill him, I wasn't too keen on how you made the setting the Matrix as it just seemed like a pointless excuse for having a Matrix style scene within the movie, it would have been better if their fight had just been a normal one, the fight wasn't too bad though, but that's only because there was story behind it. You ended it too abruptly though, the second the main character killed the old man it was all over, you should have shown the old man fall to the floor and then shown the main character's reaction as it just seemed really odd the way you just suddenly ended it, as it seemed unfinished. You needed to have some sound effects in this movie as it seemed really odd that a gun was being fired and that there was a fight scene that was, other than music, completely silent.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
Guy gos around killing people for no reasons, sounds gay to me. There are some thing that are very wrong about this movie, first of all, why is he almost as tall as the buildings. It would have been nice if you explained why he's going around killing everyone. Most of the killing scenes stink. I gave you 2 for the music and 1 caus I feel bad for you.
it may be funny, but man, there is no story to this movie.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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