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This is a short tale about a very famous puppet... what if he didnt want to be a real boy.. what if there was "anouther" side effect to his nose growing when he lies?
not good dude
this was dumb come up with something better please
ok i will, in the meantime, learn how to leave a constructive review!
Till you do you cant say anything anyone else does is dumb. :P
Basically you got 4 stars for two reasons. One it was a straight forward comedy which was simple enough. Two the animation was quite good quality. The problem I found with this video is that it doesn't give me anything new to laugh at. Another Micheal Jackson sex joke. In your next work try and think more outside the box. Go for something that nobody else has done before. If that isnt good then people who watch it will deliver constructive critisism to help you keep improving. Its hard work to create a masterpiece but keep making more and more you'll get a better and start making really decent videos. Tell me when you release your next flash and ill comment on it. Don't be dishartened there were plenty of positives to take from this
The MJ joke was just thrown in in the middle of production the main joke was the fact that Pinocchio's got a woody...
Yeah i've ran the main idea past countless people before i started production and they all liked it and didnt find it predictable so yeah..
I have plenty of new stuff i can do i just gotta decide on the one i wanna do next.
i know its hard to make these and i like it but next time could u make it longer please respond
i know the difficultys of animation and im not good my self so i cant judge so 5/5 an 8/10 good luck
awsome thanks for the 5/5, yeah i'll respond to ya.. in fact i like to respond to all my reviews.. yeah it was hard to make.. it took me 3 hours just to do the very first scene where he's walking to the door.. that and i just upgraded my flash i was using flash 5 and this was made on flash 8 the framerate was mush faster and i'm not used to that so thats why it was so short.. total time it took me to make the thing was 9 working hours spread out over 2 days.
It was okay
If you do a better job at animating and that stuff, Im sure you will make it to the frontpage.
yeah i just need experiance thats all.. this was only my second submision. the first one... well you wont find it here anymore.. people can be cruel sometimes.
I liked the randomness in it...
I'm glad you like random, though it wasnt intended to be..
Pinocchio walks into a sex-o-holics meeting and starts lieing to make his nose grow on purpose then he looks at one of the ladies in the group and winks at her.. its a suggestive theme.
I'd have to say the only thing i saw as random was the MJ joke when the instructor tells him this is a sex-o-holics meeting.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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