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Fight till the end-part2

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The continuation of the fight i did before. I add a few efects on it, to try some stuff. i took out the the movement of the clouds and the grass.

i hope u enjoy it and be free to criticise

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nice

you cant beat sticks lol

rpsousa responds:

thz again, i can always count on you to give me a good score XD

Nope

The tiny text ruined it for me, plus I doubt many magic wielding martial arts masters speak with emoticons.

rpsousa responds:

I know i tried to add a bit of story to it, there was one line it was small, srry about that but i was in a worry to finish it, cause in the next one im trying to do one with a lot more of fighting and a lot less lines.

once again srry for that

good

well it is a good film and it has good moves so I say it is a good pick

rpsousa responds:

thz dude !!!!

Didn't hate it

Soundtrack was good, fight scenes were better, but could have been improved a bit. Add some better graphics, stick figures are not always terrible, but actual cartoons are better. Also some of the text was really weird.

rpsousa responds:

Yep, i had to take some quality out off the scenario, i added some stars glwing and some clouds with a couple of effects and the animation started to lag, but im trying to find out if theres something i can do about it for my next one. the soundtrack didnt match the fight as well has my first one but in the next one its great (i already started it :P)

I dont hv a drawing pad yet and i love stickman fight thats why im going with stickman( for now).

About the text, srry ill be more carefful with that on my next one.

Thz for the advices, i apreciat it!

Ugh.

The chatspeak was WAY too much. This dialogue was pathetic, and way over dramatic, the song choice was loud, the animation was slow and choppy, and then drawing was poor. It's really bad.

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3.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 13, 2008
4:47 PM EDT