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Oct 12, 2008 | 2:12 PM EDT

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Hello, all!
My name's Trent, and this is like, my first flash EVER. (Well, technically it's my second, but I'm not counting the first one because it was so crappy and got blammed, like, 5 seconds after it got uploaded. :D)
Anyways, after about five years of not animating in flash, i took a multimedia course at my school, and started getting into it again. So, here's my first ever flash cartoon! Hope you like it! (Please don't be too hard on me, I'm only a beginner! :(

Reviews


natwelnatwel

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

So Excellent, Great

The artwork is so beautiful and angelic. I love the grey hair and blue background, a real anime artist you are. If only more flash animations were as good as this. Well Done.
*Adding to Favourites*



CSSLZT13CSSLZT13

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

I give you kudos for effort.

I gotta wonder just how bad your first flash was if it got blammed quickly. This one, on the other hands, shows exactly what I wish others would do -- actually take the time out to create a good piece of flash, rather than just submitting their latest creation that took them, what, five minutes? But your multimedia class has paid off very well here in this flash, since even though the fact that you are a beginner of sorts is evident in this pic, the amount of effort put into this work is also clear. It has a great premise, the drawings are realistically good enough to denote patience, and the choice of music was spot-on. I give you a seven here because the artwork and animation style are obviously lacking, but I doubt you'll neglect to resolve that some in your next flash.

I really liked this one. It shows much potential, and, better yet, the ideal of quality over quantity. For your first flash in five years, you've done very well. Now let's see what you can do.



NFLrockerNFLrocker

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Not great

But i liked it. Especially for ur first flash. Good job the story kinda reminded me of Jak III, was that ur influence? But anyways i liked it just work on ur animation. Hope to see more keep rockin \m/



saberzerosaberzero

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

improvement is required

ok, as this is your first time, i understand that it takes time to learn stuff, but you really got to improve if your submissions are to survive here. Good luck with this.



tHe-JeRktHe-JeRk

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Everyone starts somewhere

This is a very solid start. Decent story and the animation shown here is actually a pretty good starting point.