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Oct 12, 2008 | 2:12 PM EDT

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Hello, all!
My name's Trent, and this is like, my first flash EVER. (Well, technically it's my second, but I'm not counting the first one because it was so crappy and got blammed, like, 5 seconds after it got uploaded. :D)
Anyways, after about five years of not animating in flash, i took a multimedia course at my school, and started getting into it again. So, here's my first ever flash cartoon! Hope you like it! (Please don't be too hard on me, I'm only a beginner! :(

Reviews


blazer99blazer99

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Great!!

I digg the art style, simple, kinda primary, but my word does it look story book based, which completely suited this cartoon. The plot however, was a little off the lines of your great storyline, which may i say was very creative and pleasant. You should have never said the end, but rather made this a teaser into future storylines of flash movies. If you keep at it, ur mouse drawing skills will get better, but i`d rather have the same art style as this one throughout. I see how much work u put into this, and the music was awesome in it`s mood.
All in all, ima giv u a 9 just so u keep going at it, and soon u`ll be gr8, im sure. anyway--keep it up man, gr8 flash



Auto-DestructAuto-Destruct

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Great

Nice dude.
I haven't seen flash movies as good as this one in a while yet.
Good job and keep it up.



ForbidMetalForbidMetal

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

keep going

ok here goes.

The story: Very intrigueing and I would love to know more in following flashes so stick with this and build on it.

The animation: Smooth-ish and not too great however good enough not to make me consider that your a beginner

Graphics; Not too decent and very blotchy, try experiment with the line tool next time and see what u can do but as all things this will develope over time

Give it 4-5 years or maybe even less and ull be turning out some really great great stuff
and for insperation watch blockhead episode 1 then watch episode 10. Just to show you what time and dedication can really get you.

Keep it up and don't give up.
cheers,
ForbidMetal


tcoffin responds:

thank you very much. I really appreciate everyone's support!
I'll do my best to improve!


Genogenesis7Genogenesis7

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

wheeeeeee

That was awesome! The story and concept were great, but the animation made it a little slow-paced.

If you work on your animation, you could expand on the story and make it a series! I'd be happy to provide voice acting! (=



Warlock12Warlock12

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Good

Good for a beginner, I liked the fact that you took the time to add sound and animations (such as blinking and wing movements) Keep up the good work, you'll get better as you progress.