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Oct 12, 2008 | 2:12 PM EDT

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Hello, all!
My name's Trent, and this is like, my first flash EVER. (Well, technically it's my second, but I'm not counting the first one because it was so crappy and got blammed, like, 5 seconds after it got uploaded. :D)
Anyways, after about five years of not animating in flash, i took a multimedia course at my school, and started getting into it again. So, here's my first ever flash cartoon! Hope you like it! (Please don't be too hard on me, I'm only a beginner! :(

Reviews


Auto-DestructAuto-Destruct

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great

Nice dude.
I haven't seen flash movies as good as this one in a while yet.
Good job and keep it up.



ForbidMetalForbidMetal

Rated 3 / 5 stars

keep going

ok here goes.

The story: Very intrigueing and I would love to know more in following flashes so stick with this and build on it.

The animation: Smooth-ish and not too great however good enough not to make me consider that your a beginner

Graphics; Not too decent and very blotchy, try experiment with the line tool next time and see what u can do but as all things this will develope over time

Give it 4-5 years or maybe even less and ull be turning out some really great great stuff
and for insperation watch blockhead episode 1 then watch episode 10. Just to show you what time and dedication can really get you.

Keep it up and don't give up.
cheers,
ForbidMetal


tcoffin responds:

thank you very much. I really appreciate everyone's support!
I'll do my best to improve!


Genogenesis7Genogenesis7

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

wheeeeeee

That was awesome! The story and concept were great, but the animation made it a little slow-paced.

If you work on your animation, you could expand on the story and make it a series! I'd be happy to provide voice acting! (=



Warlock12Warlock12

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good

Good for a beginner, I liked the fact that you took the time to add sound and animations (such as blinking and wing movements) Keep up the good work, you'll get better as you progress.



kazoodackazoodac

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

keep at it!

You've got a really cool concept going here! If you keep at it, improve your flash skills, and continue to develop the plot, I could see this as developing into an awesome series. Many of the greatest series on Newgrounds started like this, and as you watch, the quality continues to grow. If you work hard and don't give up, your idea will do the same! Nice work!