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Oct 12, 2008 | 9:59 AM EDT

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This is my second animation - I know it's short, but it's more because I really want critique about the animation. And please don't bash it cause it's stickman; I know it isn't particularily innovative, but that's not the point. Thanks :-)

Reviews


peachprincepeachprince

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not too bad. We all have to walk before we run....

Unless you have rickets. The animation was a bit choppy but a nice attempt. Perhaps a little intro would be nice. It was kind of like a silent but deadly fart. By the time you realized what had happened, it's over with.



ShinzuraShinzura

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Meh...

Animation isn't smooth... Too monotone, which made the character's body parts blend together. Plus, anything that seemed to appear (such as tears) just popped into place for a split second



DicerathDicerath

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Devastated

The mourning stick man continued to collapse and cry his ass off even after he walked away :\ Just thought I'd mention the obvious.

Anyways, good job! I could tell this was about 90% FBF, if not more - which is okay, because you used it well.



Squishy69Squishy69

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Has potential

Animation was smooth, but you should've put in sound as well as length. But yeah a good premise nonetheless.



monkeymany2k3monkeymany2k3

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Your not ready yet

good attempt, and i respect that your trying to learn flash, but practice some more, come up with a style, some characters, and a story, and try again.