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This is my second animation - I know it's short, but it's more because I really want critique about the animation. And please don't bash it cause it's stickman; I know it isn't particularily innovative, but that's not the point. Thanks :-)
Not too bad. We all have to walk before we run....
Unless you have rickets. The animation was a bit choppy but a nice attempt. Perhaps a little intro would be nice. It was kind of like a silent but deadly fart. By the time you realized what had happened, it's over with.
Animation isn't smooth... Too monotone, which made the character's body parts blend together. Plus, anything that seemed to appear (such as tears) just popped into place for a split second
The mourning stick man continued to collapse and cry his ass off even after he walked away :\ Just thought I'd mention the obvious.
Anyways, good job! I could tell this was about 90% FBF, if not more - which is okay, because you used it well.
Animation was smooth, but you should've put in sound as well as length. But yeah a good premise nonetheless.
Your not ready yet
good attempt, and i respect that your trying to learn flash, but practice some more, come up with a style, some characters, and a story, and try again.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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