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Oct 12, 2008 | 9:59 AM EDT

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This is my second animation - I know it's short, but it's more because I really want critique about the animation. And please don't bash it cause it's stickman; I know it isn't particularily innovative, but that's not the point. Thanks :-)



Rated 2 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Not too bad. We all have to walk before we run....

Unless you have rickets. The animation was a bit choppy but a nice attempt. Perhaps a little intro would be nice. It was kind of like a silent but deadly fart. By the time you realized what had happened, it's over with.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008


Animation isn't smooth... Too monotone, which made the character's body parts blend together. Plus, anything that seemed to appear (such as tears) just popped into place for a split second


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008


The mourning stick man continued to collapse and cry his ass off even after he walked away :\ Just thought I'd mention the obvious.

Anyways, good job! I could tell this was about 90% FBF, if not more - which is okay, because you used it well.


Rated 3 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Has potential

Animation was smooth, but you should've put in sound as well as length. But yeah a good premise nonetheless.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars October 12, 2008

Your not ready yet

good attempt, and i respect that your trying to learn flash, but practice some more, come up with a style, some characters, and a story, and try again.