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Oct 11, 2008 | 5:26 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place October 12, 2008

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Author Comments

My submission to the NG Halloween contest 2008, so please recommend it for me.

This is my third completed flash. I tried to make it scary, and hope I've accomplished that. Trying to scare someone through an animation is really difficult without sudden "jump" scenes. So this was a lot of fun to make. If you don't find it scary, I hope you enjoy it anyways. I highly suggest you watch it in the dark with the sound up. I like to work with sound in my animations more so than actually animating.

Anyways, please rate/comment. Don't just rate down my animation and not say why. I always like to read constructive criticism to improve off of.

Thank you for watching!



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Alice is a murderer, not some kind of monster.

I like the little preschool noises at the start of the film because it reminds me of a scene in American McGee's Alice where there is a building which is a apparently a school and though unable to enter, you can hear the joyous sounds of children inside. It seems to drag on with the car and road at the beginning. If done right, this is a good tool in movies but not in flash. Why? Because it doesn't have a positive affect when it's a mere drawing.

I don't like the idea of all the incidents being taped. It seems inconvenient. Why would someone have a running recorder in the car or even stand there taping in the dark of night when they know they are in danger? I don't like how you gave Alice the disposition of an animal or some monster. McGee's Alice is a murderer, not a fictional beast that has special skills to kill.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

in all honesty,

i don't think it was that scary...


Rated 4 / 5 stars


Incredibly creepy considering it leans more toward cartoonish than realistic. Although I can't help but feel like it borrows a bit from recent horror movies like The Ring or The Grudge.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

GAH! Creepers!

Scared the poo out of me! Well timed, sir.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Gripping, definitely scary.

This had me freaking out at the end. The atmosphere, the creepiness, the scariness, it was all there. You definitely earned 10/10 and 5/5. Great job and I hope there are more on the way!

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