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rated 2.45 / 5 stars

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Flash Numero Trois already? Wow, that was quick huh? I just submited my 2nd flash yesterday night! Well, today after school, I had this great idea for a flash, and I quickly got to work. Little did I know that I would end up finishing before going to bed! That was roughly 5 hours, excluding eating dinner and a bit of homework. So here's my "five hour project!"

Also, I turned down the volume of the background music so you can actually hear the dialogue... ;D

It's about a Transformer who's a father and wants to tell his son something. This flash is rather short, but I think it's better than my first and second flashes. Enjoy, rate, comment!

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Aci6

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 10, 2008

The style is different with some neat looking backdrops and metallic voices coming from the two robots which the flash seems to be about.
However its short lived as the story seems a little odd and hard to really grasp, along with the flash dragging on for quite a while it becomes quite annoying to watch.
Some improvement would be to add some actual animation and fix the voices; while they may go with the robots its annoying and makes the flash instantly hard to get into.

~A~

ThatAzianKid responds:

Even though I kinda flinched when I saw that 0/10 you gave me lots of good advice, thanks =D

MaximuMMaximuS

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 9, 2008

could use work

voice acting wasnt good nor was animation, and voice p but whats to be expected in a 5 hour flash?

DaRockMan

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 9, 2008

That was good not great but good

I've seen better but for your third submission this is above average one negative I have to point out is that sometimes during the speech the background music got distorted and then over powered the voices with static