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Well I put alot of work into this. I do think this one of my best ones. I really love sprites im still working on drawn animations. I will put some on when I get better at this. Even though some people hate sprites please vote as if it were drawn:)
I think the animation is alright, but if you're going to put a lot of time and effort into anything, make sure the grammar/spelling in your captions is at least somewhat right. It's frustrating to see something that someone works hard on filled with errors; it just looks a lot more professional if that kind of thing is eliminated.
With all that's said below, all I can add is: keep practicing. That's the best thing you can do. You'll catch up to the big names in no time.
Hate to burst your bubble, but...
...there will be some people-such as Shrums, SeanJoystick, The-DeadDuck, AivinEarthworm, and DaVeB0T-who hate sprite flash movies, regardless of the quality, so there's no use appeasing them.
One detail that could be improved is the types of sprites used. If a scene in the flash is in 8-bit, then use 8-bit sprites; things look odd when a 16-bit or 32-bit sprite appears in a mostly 8-bit scene.
Animation was good, but I wasn't very interested. Also, fix spelling, grammar and all that.
srry im lazy
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