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Oct 8, 2008 | 4:24 PM EDT

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FLASHGOERS BEWARE!!!! THIS MOVIE IS SLIGHTLY EDUCATIONAL!!!!

This was made as a project for school. The idea was to make something funny and informative about the english colonies. I cut out the names, and submitted it to NewGrounds, only because of it's comeidic value. Enjoy.

-Sa'th

(Better animations to come)

Reviews


GreenAppleNinjaGreenAppleNinja

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 26, 2008

lol that was not educational

you need to add more contrast between the text and the background. i could barely read. and the objects dont match the flash peoples sizes. you need to improve a lot more.



KrizyKrizy

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 19, 2008

YAY

Why did I miss this?! Tell me when you submit stuff, mate! ;D

This was actually pretty good for a school project,
Was your teacher impressed? Did you get any grade?
If so, what grade?
BY THE WAY we had about that thing this flash is about a week ago!!!
HAHAH

Anyway, things to improve on:
- Background is moving? Do you only have one layer?
To get more layers, click the "Insert Layer"-button or
go on the "Insert..."-selection in the top-left-corner.
Then you can have one layer for backgrounds and on
layer for characters etc.
- The text is hard to read. Next time, please fill the chat-bubbles
white, or make the text glow. To make a text glow, go on the
"Filters"-selection next to the "Properties"-Selection.
- The movement is pretty laggy. Use more frames! Or you can
use tweens. (right-click character)

I think you just should quit sprites, and pick up the brush tool. ;)

Other than that, you getting better and better!
- The frames were long enough to read the text.
(very many animations are bad in that thing)
- Good use on the backgrounds. You make the
perfect atmosphere.
- Really good music choice!

--

I see you used my song!!!! WEEE, I'm so happy. Thank you. :]

Keep it up, mate. Practise your brushtool-skills please.
You should also try animating your own backgrounds!
(Then you might choose linetool and gradient colors! ;)

-.KrizY.-


SAROTH responds:

Thanks for the advice! Not all of my animations will be sprites, i'm just using sprites for my early animations because they're easy to work with.


marce78marce78

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 11, 2008

You fail at flash, but thanks for trying.

not really lol


SAROTH responds:

lol. :P


TheOnurbTheOnurb

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars October 8, 2008

Yikes

The animation was terrible, choppy, unrealistic...etc. etc.
I would suggest the next time you make a Flash, take advantage of "layering" instead continuously copy and pasting the background in, trying make make it just like it was in the previous frame.

Since it was for school, I gave you a 1.


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SAROTH responds:

Layering, thus far, has given me hell. I'm trying to figure it out though.


EL3CTRODUDEEL3CTRODUDE

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars October 8, 2008

... what?

no offense but this was awful , i could barely read text and i got bored while watching the flash. If there is a next time you should put music that fits the situation, not some random techno music. over all i give it a 3 for the effort that u put in.


SAROTH responds:

Yeah, I'm still learning the ropes of flash 8.