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Oct 7, 2008 | 11:12 AM EDT

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Well, inspired by the Dumb Laws series by Derek Plato and Tomas , being a Singaporean, I decided to release this crazy laws of Singapore. Where is Singapore? In a region called South-East Asia, not part of China as most foreigners believe. I don't hate these laws but I find them humorous and just want to share them with the world. If you want to know, the song is by Guns 'n' Roses and the title of the song is "Paradise City". Since Of-Coarse Productions is relatively new(I created it myself), I decided to try something simple. I welcome anybody to comment on the flash as long as they make some sense and is helpful to me producing better flashes. Singaporeans in NG(don't know whether many exist) can come and look and comment lah.

I respond to all comments eventually. :)

Reviews


PacossiPacossi

Rated 0 / 5 stars

wth

ok CoarseOne,
if your laws are ment for reading - try to let them pass more slowly ;)
Funny information can be postet in any funny forum, you don't need flash for that. Perhaps you make a quiz of it...


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dawg25043dawg25043

Rated 1 / 5 stars

too fast

The laws go by way too fast. I don't mean you miss the last line, I mean even someone who reads quite fast like me, won't even get through half of a good portion of them. Make sure you watch the video and read them yourself before submitting.



Tempus37Tempus37

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Slow it down!

It's not a race to see how fast a person can read. The screens move so fast it's hard to read them. Stuff like this takes a more than half-a-second to read and understand and react to. just slow down the transition or, better yet just add a next button to the screen and let the viewer control the pace.


CoarseOne responds:

Thanks for the review! =D It is much slower now and you should be able to read it. I still have not learnt how to put the button. Anyway here's the link for my re-submit http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /463625


PylonGamesPylonGames

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Needs work

While the laws may be funny, the frames move too fast for most people to read them, you should simply have a next button instead of making text a movie. Also, the file size is 6mb for a list of text, the music is not important enough to require such a large increase in size. Remember that not everyone has a fast internet connection, it could take someone with dial up quite a long time to load this.


CoarseOne responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah I understand. I released my improved version of this flash and re-submitting it. Oh yeah and I no longer use that song anyway. I just use a less than 1MB music file from the audio portal. The link is here (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/vie w/463625). Hope you view it and give your honest comment and vote.


marky-mangle777marky-mangle777

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

I'm voting 1

because it was way too fast. Either make it slower, or put buttons on. It's a good idea though, i read a few that cracked me up (bubblegum is prohibited? WTF?) but it went so fast I couldn't read the rest. Just slow it down, and re-submit it.


CoarseOne responds:

Yeah i updated it. I have made it slower so that NG-users can read. I have re-submitted it and the link is http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /463625 . Thanks for the good review =D