Assemble your own Abomination!
Blend your own Beast!
Create your own Creature!
Your worst nightmare is coming alive!!!
A demon/monster-part-dress-
up-gadget.
(Fullscreen button is (probably) only functional
att www.dawnland.com/playgrou nd)
Idea came up when watching the fantastic creatures from the new Hellboy movie (www.hellboymovie.com/cre atureAnatomy/creatureAnat omy.html)
Some years ago I saw this Demon Generator (which I didn't watch (again) until after my gadget was finished (because it could ruin my own ideas)
(www.torvenius.com/bilder /animation/summon/)
Drawings and flash programming (c) 2008 dawnland.com
Dress Up featuring Abomination flash. Graphics are average and could use more attention to detail. You should include some different background scenes. Having more props and options would be helpful.
This was made on 10/7/08, and I am only the twelfth person to review it.
Another good one
Submissions such as this one here today are differant, sometimes unique but always exciting, so throughout this review today i will suggest some new possibilities on improving, but as far as i can see now, it was a good entry. OK so i saw the other one and was pretty impressed with what you had going on, and like that one this one is pretty good aswell, and this was another great idea allthough it was the same as the other but still good i thought, Now i did mention in the last one that the buttons and some added color could be a better option inimproving this, i will go into more detail later but that would be a big plus on your part. Very impressed, that was my lasting impression on this piece, allthough there are some areas that you could have dones this or that differant and a touch more efort, but for the most of this i was pretty impressed and liked what you had to offer.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some of these types of entries are hard to give some good feedback into making them better, but i think i can muster up some ideas here, just look into the advice and ideas and go with it, just try and make it work. So making the buttons larger and more fancy would be a big plus on this, also adding some color and some colored backrounds would be another plus on your part.
Nice
Really a quality dressup, and I liked the whole "freaky" theme. However, I agree with the person below me, that it needs to have checkboxes, instead of just "roll over them accidentally and it changes" ones.
Also, what's up with the mature rating? I didn't really see anything that could really be considered not child-safe, or at least teen safe. I kept expecting... something. Anything mature. Just because of that, I made a reasonably sexy creature (though that probably says more about me that it should).
Anyway, great game.
Thanks for the review! Didn't see it before now but I've been on a loong vacation.
An updated and easier to use version was posted here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /467202
Really don't know why the "mature" rating come from. Will see if I can change it.
Thanks again!!!
/Daniel
Nice
A reasonably fun creature creator with nice art. Only issue is that accidentally rolling over a box will change a body part selection into that box's selection. Make it to where you have to click, to avoid pointless frustration.
Thanks for the hi grade!
Will probably implement the fact that you have to click the buttons in next version.
/daniel
It's good.
Theres plenty of variation and the art's not too bad. But the buttons are a little too small and close together. If you can if you can fix that up it would be much better.
Thank you for your review.
I am gathering opinions to se what can be improved. Really don't have time for this ;)
Problem with the small buttons is not that big when one watch it at it's original resolution (which is 1024 x 640 px or even bigger in fullscreen - http://www.dawnland.com/playground - newgrounds have a width limit of 800 pixels.)
/daniel