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Here it is, Sprite Rape. Sorry it's so short, I promise the next one will be much longer. Please vote fairly and leave constructive critisicm.
Sprites have never been my thing. I never liked sprite movies. But it wasn't bad.
Hey, thanks for voting fairly even though you don't like sprites!
Well...I Like It
Was this your fist flash???? If so u need improvement. i read your thingy and i cant wait for the longer one. I liked the cock joke flash but maybe try to put in a real cock joke. LOL those crack me up...... any way ill give a 7 becuase it was short. but i did love the metal gear skit that was funny as hell... anyway if you ever need any ideas for your videos im pretty creative when it comes to flash. i havent summitted them yet though.
...What if it wasn't my first?
The Metal gear skit was hilarious, the others were ok but relied too much on references. If you could keep this concept with some fresh or less reference based comedy it'll shape into an amazing flash.
It was pretty funny, it looked good, the voices weren't bad all, shame it was a bit short.
Things to improve on: longer first i.e. more jokes and stuff. Improve the voices. They were good, but a bit quiet for my liking.
A solid start. Keep at it!
xD Great one! Sure it was short and not exactly the greatest stuff, but man, that was still rather comical, I'l be keeping an eye out for more of your work
Thanks man. I'm gonna get right to work with the next one.
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