Welcome To The Machine by cheshirecat1582



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Submitted: 10/03/2008 | 04:50PM EST

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Genre: Puzzles

Current Score: 4.28 / 5.00

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This is quite experimental. I really worked hard on the artistic look and feel it gives. Its a little more abstract then my other flashes.

It starts off a little slow but stick with it... I promise It picks up a bit... I REALLY hope you enjoy this... PLEASE comment!!! I know I say that allot on my flashes I submit but you have no idea how much I enjoy reading what other people think about my work... All I ask is for you be kind... And if you think it sucks... Please tell me why it sucks... I learn from that feedback!!! Thanks Always
-Ashley

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Average Score: 9.4 / 10

Score: 10
AlDBarron

"Ouch."

date: October 3, 2009

This flash was so interesting, I even managed to force my eyes to stay open through the epileptic siezures it evoked just to make sure I got to see the entire thing. Great work! :-)

(And yah, I'm kidding 'bout the epileptic siezures - but I'm sure folks can see where I'm comin' from with that... ;-DDD)

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Score: 9
AKS9

"77777"

by: AKS9
date: September 28, 2009

wow that was insane.. did start off slow, but soon picked up..
i love the swirly circles within circles you had at the beginning, and just the huge machine and all the parts and pieces and circuits
great use of metaphors and mixing things up, like the guitar strings (but there should be SIX!! XD)

the body with the machine inside it was really, really good, that nailed it, i was just kinda in awe for a moment there. the intricate masses of machinery and all that stuff is just really good.

constructve crits would be, work more on the animation! making the movements smooth and awesome, like the rockets path and all that..

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Score: 10
seanlong38

"WOAH! Mind check!"

date: July 13, 2009

WOW, This was amazing. Smooth flash, neat animation. But I see the underlying point in this. We ARE the machines. I didn't just get that from the set up, you were basically trying to set free the minds that have been trapped in the cloak of uniformed society. That was very spiritual. I honestly didn't know what to expect... at first i was all "this isn't my thing" then i got the point behind the flashy lights and smooth animation!

-Sean Long [Not just another pretty face XD :P]

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Score: 9
IamWeird33

"Wonderful theme"

date: May 14, 2009

This movie was a sweet music video with awesome animation.
I really liked the overall concept so I thought this was a really nice flash.

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Score: 9
Esn

"Yes!"

by: Esn
date: May 6, 2009

This is fantastic. I've got to check out your other stuff now.

The sense of design was excellent, and importantly, it was connected to a relevant theme.

The only thing I'd improve is the graphics in certain places, which always looked sharp but it sometimes seemed that you didn't want to spend the time to get certain effects to look really remarkable (for example, when you move past the stars, you only have 2 layers of stars - and I think that there were too few stars in the sky, in general).

Oh, one other possible suggestion would've been to explore the heart/plug interconnectedness a little more - you could've said a lot more, I think. But still, it turned out well.

The most effective moment in the film for me was when the sky turned around right at the end.

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