Eulogy For: Edimose Online Episode 2

(Score at Death: 3.51/5.00)

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Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

10/02/08 – 11/16/08

Submitted by Mia Rose (miari) with the following comments:

SORRY IT'S SO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'm sorry if we dissapointed you we were in a hurry :o

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Your probably asking yourself... OOH A SPRITE SERIES CAN I BE IN IT!!??
Yes, Yes you can just send me a sprite sheet of your character and I'll be sure to add you to the series Nya~=====================
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Uhmm Sorry the animation is bad...

Also Can anyone send me good Sound effects for sword swings and such please im having a hard time finding them :[

OOOH And some new effects would be nice PM me if youre interested in helping me out

ANY PEOPLE WHO RESPOND TO THOSE REQUESTS GET CREDIT IN THE NEXT EPISODE AND I WILL SAY YOU HELPED MAKE IT Cuz without sound effects our world would be a sad place

ragingmullet
Is the author of the sound

KHF- Sponsor! :D
Resora- Syncher
Me- Animator
Raginmullet- Ownes most of the music in Edimose Online

Score: 4
Askandrewask

"you can tell you put effort into it..."

date: October 2, 2008

but ur heart isnt in it... the sprites look like maplestory, the plot is basically i teleported, train me..... no character development, which is always a major goal in story-like flashes... if you make another, increase the plot so i doesn't look like you asked ur baby brother to write it, and please please please for all that is good make the text legible.... i mean serously.. "whatev
er"... thats just shows a lack of heart

Score: 5
spritefan

"Lacking the basics."

date: October 2, 2008

Well one Bannedstory gives you text box's with writable text for a reason so use those, it should look much better. Also make it easier on yourself, When you put a maple background and character in flash, don't increase the size of the character or the map and it'll look good, the guy is so big compared to the background. Please animate the basic stance, it's not hard. Add a drop shadow effect to the text atleast to make it a little easier to read... When the guy does move it's really choppy too... I'm sorry this needs a lot of work and doesn't even deserve a 5/10 I'm just feeling a bit nice... Sorry to be a critic but just improve on upcoming animations

hmm... Wonder if you know me... Made this newgrounds account long before my youtube one.

-Derek

Score: 7
SimAnt

"So far so good"

by: SimAnt
date: October 2, 2008

The basics are down, I can see the basis of a story and the start of character development. Next up is just a little smoother animation and a longer flash, you might consider adding text windows or bubbles, at least some sort of background to help us read the speech between characters, the blue was hard to make out at times and would get lost on some of the background images. I hope some day you add voices to your character, all in all it was an enjoyable watch.

Score: 3
GigaGaia

"BLAH!!!"

date: October 2, 2008

Meh, but how the hell did this pass as a green???

Score: 8
DarkDumpling

"Abso-Fucking-lutly..."

date: October 3, 2008

BRILLIANT! And, I'm not just saying that to be a smartass either. Every Animator has to start somewhere right? Me myself even gave Flash a go at one point but gave up due to lack of being an Artist or semi-decent Animator. Just a suggestion: Perhaps make them longer and with more plot? I do agree slightly with the post a few below mine about it being just "Teleported, trained, and that's all folks", but I do hope to see more when it's not been rushed. 8 / 10 and a Five.