This is my second flash so please try to just leave positive comments, and a few ways to improve it! Sorry bought it being pretty slow, and the sound problem, I forgot to upload the file into my flash :S
thanks for not being so harsh!
ps: I dont expect that by saying,"It's my second flash!" I'll get simpathy, I'm just trying to say that dont expect to be like, " Holy S***! I just crapped myself!" but to just let you know Im looking for some constructive critisism,"Speed up the frame rate a bit" or "They move kinda dodgily", to help improve my flash skills so you dont have to complain about my other stuff later! :P - Also, if you can, try not to point out the too obvious stuff, like "When he walked, he was a total gimp!" or "there was no sound, and it was stupid!" thanx!