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Hey guys this is ding's first short about a meteor who can't control his trajectory heading towards a planet. Hope you guys enjoy the sounds and sights and chuckle a bit too!
i liked it alot
I dont get it
It's not really funny at all. Theres a meteor that's shouting, a planet singing the two keep doing that for quite some time, then some news guy something which I couldnt hear because I lowered my volume because of that meteor's voice was so loud.
CircleUpSquare, what do you see in this? What's so great here? The animation isn't even that good? I seriously don't get it.
It was good at the start for a first short but...
Points for Improvement:
Make the flame move.
Don't make it too repetitive.
Add more detail
Don't keep on reusing sounds.
The audio level was terrible, the meteor spoke too loud, and the news anchor too soft, I didn't even chuckle.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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