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Not much new, some different things and i tryed some explosions ^^
Preloader didnt work
Lots of room for improvement
your animation was smooth
good choice of music
Screen was tiny
presentation was boring
lack of imagination
try coming up with characters, and a storyline. Noone wants to see your first experiment with a flash animation if it has nothing interesting to offer. Sit down and think about something that would make a cool little story or a funny joke, and bring it to life. Keep trying and you will succeed.
I didnt mean the screen to be that tiny but oh well's.
I am thinking about sorys and joke's :p
I can see you put alot of time and effort into this and tryed to make it the best you can. Tip one: add some sfx you can get them from alot of different sites e.g sound snap or flash kit.
Tip two: try to improve your drawing and use symbols.
Tip three: use some basic action scripting it can be very usefull.
Tip four: look at the tutorial collection in newgrounds it is VERY usefull
Thanks for the tip, i am a coder already :p
Granted i am not very good at coding but i am still trying my drawing skills.
Thanks for the tips and the reviews.
Positive, then tips!
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