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This is an animatic for a bigger animation... enjoy
Well good voice over.
But i didnt quite understand a joke XD. But i still give you a 5 though.
The drawing quality was decent, but a bit generic, the animation was ummm, "sticky" the movement was jumpy due to hand positions of the character just jumping around, so you might want to add some frames btween the stills really giving a sense of movement., the voice actors, didn't really seem to get into the scene. You might want to add crowd type sound effects, and maybe intro music like they would actualy have on a stand up comic show. The joke was horrible, aand verrry old, this may have been what you are going for, but you didn't put in any audience response, so there's no way to really tell.
I would certainly like to see the finished animation.
it was boring.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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