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Sep 25, 2008 | 5:07 PM EDT

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I'm Back! I wanted a laptop really bad so I decided to get a job at the apple place! I got to say out of the all the adventures I been on this is probably the wackiest it will ever get. Well you know the drill enjoy and review. And don't miss the halloween episode comeing out soon! Um thats it.

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Reviews


sambammersambammer

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

YOU MAKE ME SICK

you turned vidio making into a felony! whats the plotline? and the animation sucked, too. where does luigi come in the story, what job does he get, and what does he do? and no i am not going to vote or give a good rating for that matter, just because you put a rather badly drawn picture of boobs in the video.


Wegra responds:

You meanie! I cried for like 30 minutes! Fuck you to asshole! Nah just kidding about the crying part but think about what you write next time.


IMBORADIMBORAD

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

wtf

and you say My 'Frist dress up game'sucks



ShanusShanus

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Wut?

Very strange movie indeed.

There wasn't any animation in this at all.Just a load of pictures,that would slightly alter, and really slowly may I add. You really need to spend some time and imporve your style, if it just means animating it a bit more.

The sound was strange, I could only faintly here 1 voice clip but it was very inaudible over the song. You really should have some more voices.

Overall the story was a bit nonsensical, and very all over the place. You really need to take some time and improve most aspects of your style.

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perfect-insanityperfect-insanity

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

more effort please

your last one was better than this, what happened? sure this is random, but not funny random, just confusing, the drawings were poorly done and since it wasn't funny random, didn't fit well at all. The audio was about the only redeeming quality for a bit as it went well with the Luigi bit, but during the job scenes some new audio should be brought in, and where did the animation go? Next time if you're going to request a review make sure that it is worth the time to review

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DeflektorDeflektor

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Hello

Let's see, then.

Well, i hate reviewing that kind of flash. It's random, not funny and it looks like you never put any effort in it.

Plot : well, there is one, but hell, what does Luigi has to do in there ? Also, to make the plot interesting, you should at least make some scenes of the character at work and the trouble he goes through to finally get his laptop. Here, we have "okay, you have the work, 3 months later, i got a laptop".

Graphics : i don't know how long you have been making flashes, and to tell the truth, i'm horrible when it comes to drawings. But you can't just make some stickmen with a face. At least, try to do some real bodies.

Music : Just putting the cover of a popular video game song isn't enough. You should take more time browsing the audio portal.

I think i said everything i had. I really hate being so mean, but if you want to make something decent, you should give more work to your flashes.

(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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