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Enjoy this inside joke about a creepy kid at my school. It wasn't meant to be the best flash ever, it was just done for fun in like 4 classes at school.
Not your best work
It was short and sweet yet creepy and awkward at the same time. You've made better stuff but I can't complain that this is bad. The animation was so basic that it added to the weird feel of the dialogue-driven performance.
Its funny because every school has a kid like this, if not more than one. Needs more animation.
I don't know what everyone is complaing about...
I thought it was really funny, and well drawn. I wasn't bothered by the loud music, but it kinda took away from the hilarious voices. There was no need for the characters to move around, standing still gave them a very awkward feel, which I think was what you were goin' for.
Your drawings are great, but your animation needs a lot of work.
For one there was barely anthing moving. A few tweens in the beginning and the end but for most of the movie the characters didn't move at all. It made it boring to watch from a visual standpoint.
Your audio needs work too. The music was way louder thant he dialougue so I couldn't even tell if the voice acting was great or simply good. I think it was good, but the loud music took away from your character's conversations.
Overall these are some simple things to fix. I know this movie wasn't supposed to be visually fantastic, but there is no excuse for the audio quality. Work on these aspects and your next projects will be great. You'll actually be able to show off your drawings more when they start moving.
Good luck in the future.
Thanks for the review, I know they didn't really move, that's pretty much because of the time limit I had in class for the animation. But I recently turned the music down on the animation for make the voices easier to hear.
It was alright.
It was ok, but the voices need to be louder.
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